True

[babeboichan]

How true it is that,
if we are cheerful and contented,
all nature smiles,
the air seems more balmy,
the sky clearer,
the earth has a brighter green...
the flowers are more fragrant...
and the sun, moon, and stars
all appear more beautiful,
and seem to rejoice with us.​

 

[thahappycamper]

Like it ......a lot lolz.

 

[babeboichan]

Like it ......a lot lolz.

thank u

 

[thahappycamper]

have you read mine? i need input from a fellow poet

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like the Fabric,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Break,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die

 

[babeboichan]

have you read mine? i need input from a fellow poet

Two of a Kind,
Intertwined, Like the Fabric,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Break,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die

it good but if u change da fabric to sumthing dan it might sound much better

 

[thahappycamper]

it good but if u change da fabric to sumthing dan it might sound much better

change it for me bro
the structure is off, I know.
and the content needs improvement
did you try reciting it?

 

[thahappycamper]

it good but if u change da fabric to sumthing dan it might sound much better

I changed it.

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like the Fabric,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Break,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die

 

[babeboichan]

I changed it.

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like the
grapevine
,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never
part
,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never
falter

lol i dunno if diz sound any better

 

[thahappycamper]

lol i dunno if diz sound any better

I like it "grapevine" sounds good, let's see

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like Grapes on a Vine,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Be Sold

The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die
Heaven and Earth,
Mountains and Rivers,
Love is warm like the Sun,
A Blanket for Your Shivers,

lolz

 

[babeboichan]

I like it "grapevine" sounds good, let's see

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like Grapes on a Vine,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Be Sold

The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die
Heaven and Earth,
Mountains and Rivers,
Love is warm like the Sun,
A Blanket for Your Shivers,

lolz

lol it was good but wen u added diz
Heaven and Earth,
Mountains and Rivers,
Love is warm like the Sun,
A Blanket for Your Shivers,
it juz went off lol

 

[thahappycamper]

lol it was good but wen u added diz
Heaven and Earth,
Mountains and Rivers,
Love is warm like the Sun,
A Blanket for Your Shivers,
it juz went off lol

LMAO

the whole damn thing is butchered now bro

 

[babeboichan]

LMAO

the whole damn thing is butchered now bro

lol