For My Grandma A Poem I Wrote When She Passed Away..

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    You were the person I wanted to impress

    But no matter how hard I try I always end up in a mess

    You stayed with me when I had no one

    You gave me hope when I had none

    You were my anchor which I always lean on

    You was also my shield when I get pushed around

    You were my hopes and dream

    Like mom always say we was a team

    When I cried you cried with me

    When I'm rebellious unlike mother who always shout, you spoke gently

    You told me I'd go far

    No matter where I end up in life you told me we can never be apart

    but there you go...leaving me here alone

    who will I hug at night, who will I sing for to sleep?

    When you left you took a big chunk from my heart

    I don't know where to go, life suddenly seem so hard

    But I will not cry because you told me not too

    In my heart there will alway be fond memories of you

    I will work hard like you told me too

    I will get far because you wished for it to be true

    Just remember gramma, there will never be another you..

    Cherishing the memories we had together;

    And only in memories, our moments together would last forever...



    R.I.P my Darling and Gently Grandmother...

    - Love Eternally,

    You're Kbie, Tina
     
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    Nice poem, Tinaboo. I love my grandma too. She's was the sanest one in my family.
     
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    lol thank you ^-^
     
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    Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem with us, Tina dear
     
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    thank you so much ^-^
     
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    thank you so much PkaLotus ^-^
     
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    That's a well written poem, Tina. I lost one of the most important people in my life last year, and still trying to cope with this loss as of today. Just as you've stated, what's left are cherished memories and never ending love. What more can you ask right?
     
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    Losing some is hard, but cherishing their memories will keep you going. They would want you to be happy. Just like when they were alive, Thank you for taking the time to read it. I lost 3 people whom I cherish this year, and I'm handling it as best as I could. I am also trying to cope with my losses still. :/
     
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    Your poem was the best thing I've read all day, so thank you. What's more interesting is that you have a resemblance to one of her old friends. I've lost two people myself in the last year. It was an eye opening moment for me about how short life can be.
     
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    I'm glad my poem made you happy in some way. Really? alot of people say I resemble alot of people.. yea life is really short lived. so live life to the best of your ability. have enough. enough life, enough love, enough laughs. don't wish for more or less wish for enough just enough to get you by you'd be happier. :)
     
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    Yeah the resemblance is definitely there, and it has brought along some good old forgotten memories well. :)
     
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    thanks for the sweet poem Tinaboo...the second half made me so teary reading it bcuz it reminds of my sis that past last November...She was the most beautiful nd fun person, my best friend and sis...i miss her everyday nd nights...she took a chunk of my heart when she left this world
     
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    you make me wonder what she looks like ^-^
     
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    I'm so sorry for your loss bong Chenna.. can I call you that? I lost my best friend this summer due to brain tumor, she was like a sister to me. But think of the fond memories you guys had together, and it would make your grieving much easier. at least for me it works. ^-^
     
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    sorry for ur lost Tina. i lost three ppl this year as well..nothing is easy when it comes to that..to b honest i rather give up stuff i have just to have them back....
     
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    thanks oun, u know , u went thru it..ppl that never lost their loves one will never know the pain we gone thru...i do agree the moemories of my sis i have with her was one of the thing that helps me out, but in the same time im always in denial that she's gone as well...but again thank u, ur a very talented person..keep it up girl
     
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    Thank you bong. Yes you are correct in saying that people will never know how we feel if they didn't go through the pain of losing someone. Sometimes I am in denial too especially when I'm singing...because me and her was always singing together.
     
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    yes memories like that is what makes us missed them even more nd wanting them around...atleast u can sing and write poems to help u out. im sure ur grandma up there is proud. she is very lucky to have such a caring person like u. its a bless
     
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    I always felt bless by her to have such a wonderful and supporting grandmother. I hope that she is proud of me. I might not be such an amazing singer like her in her days but I glad I could make a couple people smile. thank you bong chenna you really cheered me up ^-^ I wuv you :)
     

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